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Can yo check my grammar? Beauty is in the eye of beholder is an unknown proverb in contemporary society. It is only a simple sentence that does not make any sense anymore. Some women think social interaction and personal success are dependent on physical attraction. Being perfect is a common issue, but when this issue becomes obsession it can become a more serious mental illness. Plastic surgery is a huge obsession among all people including preteens, teenagers, and adolescents. It is an obsession that is fed by models and celebrities who think nothing of going under the scalpel again and again in an elusive chase after a beauty icon that doesn’t exist. Plastic surgery is not without risk. It is not healthy way to look perfect. Plastic surgery can affect person physical, socially and mentally. Plastic surgery can also have many side effects. It is painful procedure that can even lead to death. A young mother, Dehlmalyz Rios, was 26 years old when she decided to have plastic surgery. Two days after the surgery her body rejected the fat that was deposited in her calves. She died by leaving two children. It can ruin lives as well. Some side effects are permanent such as physical pain. Plastic surgery includes cutting, bending, stretching and other method to manipulate body structure in order to get desired shape. This causes pain, discomfort, and swelling that may remain for a lifetime. Plastic surgery can cause depression brought on by medication used to control the after affects of surgery. Of course there is always the post-surgical risk of pneumonia from having to remain in bed for long periods of time or of forced inactivity. Sometimes there are emotional traumas from the surgery not having the desired affect, or the person’s refusal to accept the modifications. There can also be guilt or bad feelings caused by spouses, relatives, or friends. Cosmetic surgery is depends a great deal on the doctor’s qualifications. There are doctors who offer surgery at very low prices who are not skilled or qualified to perform plastic surgery. Most of these doctors are untrained except for a seminar in hotel for a few hours. Credentials aren’t checked so that people who may not even be doctors are allowed to take the seminar. In Miami, a doctor named Reinaldo Slivestre, practiced surgery in a small office. He had very little medical training. One of his patients, named Alexandra Baez, claimed that he gave him breast implants instead of the pectoral muscle implant that he had requested. Many doctors who are performing plastic surgery are not licensed by the American Board of Plastic Surgeons. They are quacks; get rich quick surgeons, performing as many surgeries as they can under less than sterile conditions. Cosmetic surgery is not for everyone. This doesn’t prevent people from seeking it. Plastic surgery costs thousands of dollars and usually requires a lot of recovery time. Some people sacrifice their basic needs to save enough money for plastic surgery. There are those who say that plastic surgery should not be used to just change someone’s appearance for the sake of vanity. Sometimes plastic surgery taken to the extreme can make someone look less than human, as is the case with Michael Jackson. People make fun of him, but he is wealthy enough that it doesn’t affect his life. But what about the person who was not wealthy or a celebrity and the surgery go wrong? The surgeon may say they are sorry, but they can just walk away. The patient has to live with the awful results. But whether the surgical effects are deemed a success or failure, both the surgeon and the patient are responsible for one requested

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I could adjust your grammar, but to be frank I am more worried that you have missed the point. 'Beauty is in the eye of the beholder' means that beauty is a matter of interpretation - like one person might think the Grand Canyon is a beautiful, majestic sight and another person might think its a big hot hole in a load of old rock. It means that whether someone or something can be called 'beautiful' depends on who is looking, because its all down to personal opinion. I honestly think your (good) argument agrees with this phrase instead of disagreeing with it.
'Beauty is in the eye of beholder' is an unknown proverb in contemporary society. It is only a simple sentence, but does not make any sense anymore. Some women think social interaction and personal success are dependent on physical attraction. Being perfect is a common issue, but when this issue becomes obsession it can become a more serious mental illness. Plastic surgery is a huge obsession among all people including preteens, teenagers, and adolescents. It is an obsession that is fed by models and celebrities who think nothing of going under the scalpel again and again in an elusive chase after a beauty icon that doesn’t exist. Plastic surgery is not without risk. It is not a healthy way to look perfect- plastic surgery can affect a person physically, socially and mentally. It can also have many side effects. Plastic surgery is a painful procedure that can even lead to death. A young mother, Dehlmalyz Rios, was 26 years old when she decided to have plastic surgery. Two days after the surgery her body rejected the fat that was deposited in her calves. She died and left two children. Some side effects, like physical pain are permanent because plastic surgery includes cutting, bending, stretching, and other methods to manipulate body structure in order to get a desired shape. This will cause pain, discomfort, and swelling that may remain for a lifetime. Plastic surgery can also cause depression brought on by medication used to control the after-affects of surgery. Alongside this, there is always the post-surgical risk of pneumonia from having to remain in bed (or other forced inactivity) for long periods of time. Sometimes, there are emotional traumas from the surgery not having the desired effect, or the person’s refusal to accept the modifications. There can be guilt or bad feelings on behalf of spouses, relatives, or friends. Cosmetic surgery depends a great deal on the doctor’s qualifications. There are doctors who offer surgery at very low prices who may not be skilled or qualified to perform such tasks. Most of these doctors can be untrained except for a seminar in hotel for a few hours. Credentials aren’t checked so that people who may not even be doctors are allowed to take the seminar. For example, in Miami, a doctor named Reinaldo Slivestre practiced surgery in a small office. He had very little medical training. One of his patients- Alexandra Baez- claimed that he gave him breast implants instead of the pectoral muscle implant that he had requested. Many doctors who are performing plastic surgery are not licensed by the American Board of Plastic Surgeons. They are 'quacks'; 'get rich quick' surgeons, performing as many surgeries as they can under less than sterile conditions. Cosmetic surgery is not for everyone, however, this does not prevent people from seeking it. Plastic surgery costs thousands of dollars and usually requires a lot of recovery time. Some people sacrifice their basic needs to save enough money for it. There are those who say that plastic surgery should not be used to change someone’s appearance just for the sake of vanity. Especially as sometimes, plastic surgery can be taken to the extreme, this can make someone look less than human- as is the case with Michael Jackson. People make fun of him, but he is wealthy enough that it does not affect his life. But, what about the person who is not wealthy or a celebrity, and the surgery goes wrong? The surgeon may say they are sorry, but they can just walk away. The patient is the one that has to live with the awful results. However, whether the surgical effects are deemed a success or failure, both the surgeon and the patient are responsible for one requested...
I put dashes where words need to be ommitted. BTW that is a very common expression, never got to be a proverb, but was printed over and over in poetry and art for thousands of years. It is not out-dated, but except for that, I'll just continue with the grammar. Where you need a new paragraph, I'll skip a line. You will have to read this carefully, because I have no color or underline to show you where I've made corrections, and you tend to leave out words. I've put them in, so look for them, okay? (Preteens, teenagers and adolescents are the same, no?) "Beauty is in the eye of beholder," is an unknown proverb in contemporary society. It is ---- a simple sentence that does not make --- sense anymore. Some women, and now many more men, think social interaction and personal success are dependent on physical attraction, and unfortunately, in this society, they are often right. Being perfect is a common issue, but when this issue becomes an obsession it can grow into a far more serious mental illness. Plastic surgery is a huge obsession among all people including preteens, teenagers, and adolescents. It is an obsession that is fed by models and celebrities who think nothing of going under the scalpel again and again in an elusive chase after a beauty icon that doesn’t exist. Plastic surgery is not without risk. It is not a healthy way to look perfect. Plastic surgery can affect a person physically, socially and mentally, and it can --- have many side effects. It is a painful procedure that can even lead to death. There is a 5% death risk for all people who undergo anesthesia, especially general anesthesia, which is used in many cosmetic operations. A young mother, Dehlmalyz Rios, was 26 years old when she decided to have plastic surgery. Two days after the surgery her body rejected the fat that was deposited in her calves. She died, leaving two children behind. Clearly it can ruin the lives of more than just its proponents. Plastic surgery includes cutting, bending, stretching and other methods to manipulate body structure in order to get a desired shape. This causes pain, discomfort, and swelling that may remain for a lifetime. Some side effects, such as physical pain, are permanent. Plastic surgery can cause depression brought on by medication used to control the aftereffects of surgery. Poor and sometimes grotesque results may also bring on depression and other emotional problems. Of course there is always the post-surgical risk of pneumonia from having to remain in bed for long periods of time or as a result of forced inactivity, and there are the risks of infection and human error. Sometimes there are emotional traumas from the surgery not having the desired effect, or the person’s inability to accept, or disappointment with, the modifications. There can also be guilt or bad feelings caused by spouses, relatives, or friends. Cosmetic surgery -- depends a great deal on the doctor’s qualifications. There are doctors who offer surgery at very low prices who are not skilled or qualified to perform plastic surgery. Most of these doctors are untrained except for a seminar in a hotel for a few hours. Credentials aren’t checked so that people who may not even be doctors are allowed to take these seminars. In Miami, a doctor named Reinaldo Slivestre, practiced surgery in a small office. He had very little medical training. One of his patients, named Alexandra Baez, claimed that he gave him breast implants instead of the pectoral muscle implant that he had requested. Many doctors who are performing plastic surgery are not licensed by the American Board of Plastic Surgeons. They are quacks, get-rich-quick surgeons, who perform as many surgeries as they can and often under less than sterile conditions. Cosmetic surgery is not for everyone. This doesn’t prevent people from seeking it. Plastic surgery costs thousands of dollars and usually requires a good deal of recovery time. Some people sacrifice their basic needs to save enough money to pay for the surgery. There are those who say that plastic surgery should not be used to --- change someone’s appearance for the sake of vanity. Sometimes plastic surgery taken to the extreme can make someone look less than human, as is the case with Michael Jackson. People make fun of him, but he is wealthy enough that it doesn’t seem to affect his life. But what about the person who is not wealthy, or what if a celebrity and the surgeon go wrong in making decisions? The surgeon may say he or she is sorry, but the surgeon can just walk away. The patient has to live with the awful results. But whether the surgical effects are deemed a success or failure, both the surgeon and the patient are responsible. ------------ That's why cosmetic surgery is called "elective" surgery. It is non-essential to the health of the patient, yet it is thoughtlessly and often carelessly indulged in by a, hopefully, rational patient and doctor, this non-essential "beauty pill" that can be, and often is, a matter of life and death.